I pitched my idea if the drunk driver crashing the car and killing his friends to the class, and the feedback I received was very productive.
1. How will the story continue if they all die- the driver will remain alive and the film will be about him going back to school and work with the guilty consciousness of a murderer. He will struggle with life until and go to councillors meetings to cope with the mental pain.
2. How will I present an animal in the road- it will be a front view of the drivers face as he sees a small animal in the road, swerves and crashes the car (the animal is not shown on camera)
3. How will I do a car crash- have the driver swerve and have a black screen and then fade into the accident or change angle of the car so we see the back end swerve for a split second (close up of the back wheels perhaps)
4. Am I going to fit this in 2 minutes- yes as setting the scene of the drunk lads should take about 20 seconds and then have them get into the car, the hesitation before driving can be 15 seconds, and the actual driving would be about 30-40 seconds of cuts and music, until they crash, which will be another 30 seconds of the close ups of the boys, and the drinks and end on the car radio screen.








